Coney Island Love Song

“I sure hope you’re not trying to steal my mermaid mister.
Or you and me gonna have issues.”

He slowly backed away from Marina.

“There ain’t no problem here, Sir.
I’m just talking to your lady friend.”

He raised his baseball bat.



43 thoughts on “Coney Island Love Song”

  1. This is a great scene, and it really answers the question (which was a tricky one this week). I had a little trouble figuring out who was speaking – with two “he’s” in the such a short piece it can be a little tricky. But overall I really liked it. Thanks for gargleblasting with us!


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